Tuesday, December 07, 2004

How did the Vietnam war end?

The war finally ended end 1975.The reason the war ended because South Vietnam surrender to North Vietnam. “The U.S. thought the war seem worthless.” A cease fire was called on the Vietnam to help end the war with North Vietnam but South Vietnam did not want that to happen.“U.S. troops started to withdrawal from the war around 1969.”

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Blogger batgirl said...

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Edited by: Lindsey Q.

December 10, 2004 at 6:45 AM  

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